Divergent - Chapter 6

Previously

Andy’s imposing figure worked against him. Nobody stops to give a lift to someone his size at that time of night, especially when you’re near a hospital. No telling what sort of weirdo who’s had to go to A&E you could end up with.

Summoning what little energy he had left Andy dragged himself to a nearby park and slumped onto a bench. He looked to the clear night sky for answers but in return all he got was silence.

As he stared at the stars an overwhelming feeling of insignificance and loneliness engulfed him. The events of the day came crashing in on him. He fought back the growing urge he had to scream while he wept until his tears ran dry. He sat without moving for a long time. His mind eventually stopped whirling but it was more out of numbness than peace.

A sudden cough made him jump. Looking round he saw a dishevelled old man standing a few feet away. “Sorry about that. Didn’t mean to startle you.”

Andy recognised him as one of the homeless people who were all too common in these parts. Everyone knew him as Scratch and he’d been in the area longer than Andy had been alive.

Alright if I sit with you?” Andy nodded and shuffled down the bench.

Scratch sat and looked thoughtfully at him, a compassionate half-smile on his face. “It’s not easy being different, is it,” said Scratch. It was not a question but Andy wasn’t sure which of the two of them he was referring to.

And then, without meaning to, Andy found himself telling Scratch everything. How he felt he’d let his friend Pete down while being in an impossible situation. How angry he was for having been put in that situation The car accident. Pete’s mother’s reaction. He even told him about his new-found ability, although he didn’t expect Scratch to believe him.

I didn’t ask for any special power. I’m just a kid. I don’t want this kind of responsibility!” Andy looked imploringly at Scratch.

You sound like you’re channelling Spider-Man.” Scratch smiled kindly and Andy laughed, suddenly feeling understood and less alone.

Scratch talked to Andy for a long time. It was as though he was inside Andy’s head and knew just what to say to help him make sense of it all. And how to better accept the things that just wouldn’t make sense.

Andy was surprised at his depth of wisdom and understanding. Like everyone else in the town, Andy has never seen beyond the label of “Scratch, the homeless guy” and he felt ashamed.

So what about you?” asked Andy. “How did you life bring you to where you are?”

For the briefest of moments Andy thought he saw Scratch’s blue eyes turn orange but he dismissed it as a trick of the light from the rising sun.

Well that,” said Scratch, “is a very long story.”

posted 2 years ago on May 21st, 2010 at 11:06 /
tags: Divergent Friday TMC PG
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Lost Cities of Argentina - Chapter 5

Previously

Chapter 5

“Poultry and Rabbit Inspector?! This is how you plan on getting me access to the main government building? What did you call it – The Garden?” Fernando waved the forged papers towards the large building in the distance which could just be seen through the apartment window.

“Yes,” she replied patiently. “That position is held in the highest regard and will grant you unrestricted access. Once you are inside a colleague of mine will escort you to the room you need.” She was convinced he was The Chosen One and that once he got to the room with The Device he would know what to do.

If he had understood her correctly, this device somehow allowed one to see everywhere and everywhen simultaneously. It was rumoured that it also enabled travel to wherever or whenever. Fernando had no choice but to go along with her seemingly crazy plan. He wanted to get home and he had no other options.

Until he was inside The Garden - a towering, grey, lifeless edifice which housed the city’s Technocrats, bureaucrats and suchlike - he was convinced that he would end up in prison. Or worse.

He approached the main gate nervously while doing his best to appear calm and confident. The guards eyed him with suspicion but as soon as he showed them his papers they immediately began to treat him with deference. They escorted him to The Garden’s foyer where he was met by a small, nondescript man who indicated that Fernando should follow him.

He was lead through a maze of hallways, stairs and elevators until they reached a long corridor with a single door at the end. Nondescript nodded in the direction of the door and left. Fernando made his way down the corridor until he stood facing the door. It was a plain wooden door upon which a large white number “1” had been fixed. As he reached for the brass handle a familiar voice came from behind him.

“Hello Fernando. You took your time getting here.”

***

This web of time - the strands of which approach one another, bifurcate, intersect or ignore each other through the centuries - embrace every possibility. ~ Jorge Luis Borges

***

Younger Quizzical still couldn’t quite believe that his trip had been approved and was grateful for the advice that Taller Wider had given him. He whistled happily to himself, enjoying the warmth of the mid-morning sun as he made his way to The Ministry for Temporal Relocation. He was completely lost in thought, which is why he didn’t notice the lamppost.

As he rubbed his forehead it occurred to him that there were no lampposts on this street. At least there weren’t a few moments ago. He looked around and found himself in a much narrower street, lined with old-fashioned buildings. It had suddenly become dark and foggy.

Other than the street lamps the only light he could see came from a building a little further down the road. He made his way towards it, passing a beautifully preserved, vintage Cadillac. On the wall by the Cadillac someone had spray-painted an ornate alphabet. The last four letters were obscured by a poster of a winged insect. Any words on the poster had long since faded.

Voices drew his attention away from the poster towards two men who sounded as though they were arguing. Younger Quizzical approached them, noticing that they were both bald. They appeared to be fighting over a comb.

Hearing his footsteps, one of the men glanced at him. The other used this distraction to claim the comb and ran off laughing. The glance turned in to a glare and for a brief moment Younger Quizzical thought the man’s blue eyes flashed amber before he set off after the other bald man, muttering incomprehensibly.

Well, I guess we’re not in Kansas any more,” said Younger Quizzical to the cold, night air.

As he neared the building spilling its soft light into the street he saw a sign above the door: The Labyrinth. He entered the smoke-filled room and made his way to a small table, having to step round an old man on the floor who was hanging on to the bar. A few moments later a waitress placed a glass of caña in front of him. “Compliments of the lady over there,” she said, indicating a redhead on the far side of the room.

Younger Quizzical lifted the glass in her direction. She tilted her head and smiled. He lost sight of her as a man rose from a nearby table and stumbled past him to the front door. The companion of the stumbling man caught his eye. He drew deeply on his cigarette before stubbing it out in an overflowing ashtray.

Won’t you join me?” he asked Younger Quizzical. “I’ve been expecting you,” he said as he tugged on his goatee.

***

Another school declares that all time has already transpired and that our life is only the crepuscular and no doubt falsified and mutilated memory or reflection of an irrecoverable process. ~ Jorge Luis Borges

posted 2 years ago on May 10th, 2010 at 12:00 /
tags: Lost Cities of Argentina Monday TMC PG
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We’re Not In Kansas Anymore - Chapter 4

Previously

I pressed my ear up to the door and listened as hard as I could. There was nothing to be heard. I peered through the window. There was nothing to be seen. Getting locked out of my own home twice in a week was not good. I hoped that my daughters would not find out. They would not care or even believe that this time it was not my fault. This was rather bothersome.

I was feeling somewhat shaken as I sat back down on the glider. It was a little cooler this evening so I wrapped my husband’s cardigan tightly around me. I liked watching the stars come out as the day disappeared. I sang Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star to myself. It helped me to feel calm. My mother used to sing it to me when I was a little girl. My Father made me go into the cellar if he thought I’d been naughty. I didn’t like it there. Mother sang to help me feel better. That was such a long time ago.

Eventually my nerves settled down so I made myself comfortable on the glider. It was a bit too early to go to sleep so I passed the time by creating my own constellations with the stars. That group looked like a little sailing boat. The ones over there reminded me of a castle. My favourites were the ones that looked like a puppy chasing its tail. I couldn’t help but giggle.

I must have drifted off to sleep as the next thing I knew a light was shining in my face. “Ma’am? Are you alright?” I held my hand up to my eyes. A young police officer was pointing his torch at me. He looked very handsome in his crisp uniform.

I’m fine, officer,” I replied as I pushed myself into a sitting position. “What brings you here?” Although still feeling a little drowsy I remembered to smile.

One of your neighbours reported that your lights were still on. They thought that was a bit odd as it’s the middle of the night so called to let us know of their concern. I was in the area so thought I’d check in on you.”

Oh dear me! What a bother I am. I locked myself out of my house earlier. I didn’t mean to put anyone out.”

It’s no bother, ma’am. Now let’s see if I can help you get back into your home.” He walked to the back door and turned the handle. The door swung open. “It appears to be unlocked, ma’am.”

The intruders were clearly trying to make me look foolish. I would not let them get the better of me. I kept the smile on my face. “I’m so sorry officer, wasting your time like this. You must think me a frightfully silly old thing!”

Not at all, ma’am. My shift’s just finishing and I’m glad to be able to help. Now, let’s get you inside.” He helped me up and gently assisted me into the house. Such a kind young man.

I think I need a cup of tea to warm my bones. Would you care for a cup, officer? I would feel better if I had someone to sit with me for a little while.”

I noticed that he glanced at his watch. Then he nodded. “That would be much appreciated, ma’am.”

Thank you officer. You have been most kind. I shall use my good cups.” I readied two tea pots. I put ordinary tea in the one for me. “I make my own special blend,” I told him as I prepared the other pot. “I do hope you like it.”

posted 2 years ago on May 4th, 2010 at 12:34 /
tags: We're Not In Kansas Anymore Tuesday TMC PG
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WXYZ - Chapter 3

Previously

The meeting with his solicitor had not gone well. He simply wouldn’t listen to reason. Wesley had explained patiently that there was nothing in the deed stating that he had to be dead before availing himself of a mausoleum’s accommodation. The air-headed lawyer had waffled on about the spirit of the law and zoning regulations. Wesley had the distinct impression that he was not being taken seriously so had firmly but politely informed the solicitor that he would no longer be retaining his services.

Upon returning to his simply furnished apartment Wesley began systematically making his way through all the law firms listed in Yellow Pages. After making numerous calls, and before he had even reached the end of the E section, Wesley realised that the Yellow Pages clearly only advertised on behalf of idiots. He was stunned at both the rudeness and general incompetence he was met with when he explained his situation.

Wesley was certain that there must be someone with enough common sense and legal knowledge to assist him. In desperation he decided that he would turn to the internet for help. He was not a technophobe; he just had no real interest in computers and the like. He had heard his former work colleagues talk of something called “Goggle” which they claimed was a great source for finding out whatever details on whatever topic one could ever need.

He would have gone to his local library to use their facilities. Unfortunately a number of people had complained about the editing he had done to books he had borrowed and he was now banned from all libraries within a 50 mile radius. He knew that there was something called an internet café in his neighbourhood so decided to continue his research there.

One of the serving staff patiently explained how to use a browser and Google and Wesley began searching for information that would help him on his quest. He found a lot of information - everything from night clubs in Moscow to pictures advertising cemetery accommodation in Australia. Nothing, sadly, that was of any use to him.

He wondered if he might find any law firms to help him and out of frustration typed “blood sucking lawyers” in the search field. Unfortunately he inadvertently clicked the image search and ended up rather disturbed by some of the results. Somewhat dejected, he made his way home.

As he approached the apartment block he noticed the woman from 4B getting into her car. She was smartly dressed, as she had been whenever he had seen her previously, and looked to be of a similar age to Wesley. He had never been to apartment 4B and as she drove off he decided that now would be the perfect time to use his set of master keys.

He retrieved the keys from his apartment and tried to appear nonchalant as he made his way to 4B. His heart was racing with excitement. After checking that the hallway was clear he put the key in the lock and felt a little shiver run through his body. He quickly stepped inside and shut the door quietly behind him.

Her apartment was uncluttered and tastefully decorated. There was a pleasing sense of symmetry about the place that instantly made Wesley feel at ease. Best of all, there was a large antique bookcase forming the focal point of the main room. The books were arranged by height and grouped in complementary colours.

Wesley scanned the titles. There were many classics in the collection as well contemporary titles by well known authors. One book in particular caught his attention. He had heard of neither the title nor the author: ella minnow pea by Mark Dunn. He removed it from the bookcase, intrigued by the completely lower case title

As he read the back cover he knew that this was the book he would borrow. It must’ve been a challenge to write with an ever shrinking alphabet. It would no doubt be a challenge for him to edit. He relished the thought.

He opened the front cover and saw a beautiful book label which read as follows:

This book belongs to

Arabella Beatrice Clementine

And then he heard a key turning in the apartment door.

posted 2 years ago on April 28th, 2010 at 12:00 /
tags: tmc wednesday WXYZ PG
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Divergent - Chapter 1

“So, are you going to tell me why you needed to see me, or are we just going to throw this ball to each other for another hour?”

Pete held onto the rugby ball while he asked the question and looked at his friend with concern. Andy had asked to meet him round the back of the church. Said he had something he needed to talk about. It wasn’t like Andy to want to talk about stuff so Pete knew it must be important.

They were an odd pair. Andy was built like a brick shit-house, as the locals would say. That he had chosen rugby over football made him even more of an outsider in the nowhere town where he and Pete lived. Football was the town’s religion, as was the way up North, and anyone who didn’t bow down and worship at the altar of The Beautiful Game was regarded with suspicion.

Pete was of average height for his age, and perhaps a little underweight. And he was clever. Very clever. That he’d rather spend time with his head in a book than kicking a ball around the football pitch didn’t sit well with his school-mates. His friendship with Andy saved him from being bullied by all but the very stupid. Andy ensured that even the very stupid quickly learned to leave Pete alone.

Like many in the town, Andy and Pete had been raised by just their mothers. Teenage pregnancies had resulted in a lot of single-parent families in the area. In Andy and Pete’s case, however, they had each lost their father to illness before they had reached their teens. Their mothers had met at a grief counselling group and formed a friendship which had passed on to the two boys.

“Andy!” Pete had waited for an answer but Andy just stood there staring at the ground. “What’s going on?”

Andy raised his head slowly and let out a long sigh. “Sorry mate. This is hard for me.”

Pete nodded in what he hoped was an encouraging way. “No worries. Take your time.” He pointed to a couple of nearby headstones. “Let’s sit”.

They sat facing each other, their backs resting against age-worn marble. Details of who lay beneath were long since vanished.

Andy took a deep breath. “I’m not really sure how to…” he trailed off. “It might be easier if I just show you. Pass me the ball?”

Pete threw the ball to his friend. Andy crossed his legs in a semi-lotus position and placed the ball gently on the ground in front of him and simply said, “Watch.”

Pete unconsciously tilted his head slightly to the right, in that way that he does when something has aroused his curiosity, and looked intently at his friend’s face. For the briefest of moments he thought he saw Andy’s blue eyes turn orange but he dismissed it as a trick of the light from the setting sun.

Andy’s unblinking stare was fixed on the rugby ball. A rugby ball which was no longer resting on the ground. Pete watched in disbelief as it slowly rose into the air until it was at chest height. It then began moving forward, stopping in mid-air when it was a foot away from him.

Pete reached out and took the ball. He sat silently looking at it for a minute, his mind racing. When he finally looked up he saw a mixture of uncertainty and hope on Andy’s face.

They shared a nervous laugh. “Not quite what I was expecting,” said Pete “So, what else can you do?”

Andy looked confused. “ I…I don’t know. I haven’t tried to do anything else…”

“Yet.” Pete smiled, a hint of mischief showing in his eyes.

posted 2 years ago on April 16th, 2010 at 12:10 /
tags: Friday Divergent TMC PG
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Here At the End of All Things - Chapter 4

Previously

Jacinta had tried to keep track of the passing of the days but her time alone in the desert was now a blur. She could have been out there for two days or two weeks for all she knew. No. Not two weeks. She would not still have been alive if she had been alone for two weeks. Being raised by desert dwellers had given her the necessary skills to survive as long as she had but her body and mind were now feeling the effects of the relentless, merciless sun.

A small group of rocks, which were out of sight of the camp, had become her home. These rocks would have provided little in the way of protection for an adult but Jacinta had managed to make use of them. She had crept into the camp one night and taken some scraps of food and a blanket woven from goat hair, the same material her people used for their tents.

Each morning, as the sun began to taunt the valley, Jacinta created a shelter among the rocks. She hid under her blanket which she covered with a thin layer of sand to help her blend into the surroundings. During the day she slept fitfully, occasionally drifting into the same, fevered dream of an unblinking blue eye staring at a rock from which dark red, almost black blood was flowing slowly. In the middle of one such dream a distant rumble invaded her sleep. Quiet at first it gradually got louder and louder. The blood seemed to flow from the rock in time with the insistent pounding as the blue eye pulsed malevolently.

Jacinta jolted awake, her heart beating wildly, every part of her body tingling with anxiety. She became aware that the noise from her dream was disturbingly real. She kept still under her blanket and listened. After a few moments she carefully peered out of her makeshift shelter.

The last rays of the sun were dancing on the horizon providing enough light to see the source of the noise clearly. A little way off she could make out a group of travellers and the creatures they had been riding. They must have been riding hard to make that much noise on the desert floor. There were three of them, tending to their rides and preparing a camp.

It was the creatures which captured Jacinta’s attention first. She had never seen anything like them. She studied the one closest to her. Four highly muscled legs supported a sleek body which must have been twice Jacinta’s height. An elongated head was supported by a strong neck on which a tangled mane of hair glistened in the dying light. A long tail twitched aimlessly at its rear. The body, neck and head were a deep reddish brown but the legs and hair were as black as a starless night. It was both majestic and frightening.

Turning to the riders Jacinta was struck by the paleness of their skin. They took off their plain looking riding cloaks to reveal a colourful array of what she presumed were well crafted garments. Just before the sun finally dropped to the other side of the world she caught glimpses of gold and silver, ruby and emerald.

The trio hastily erected a small tent and built a fire which they were soon using to prepare a meal. The smell of cooking assailed Jacinta, teasing her and reminding her how hungry she was. The aroma was strange but not unpleasant. The only thing keeping her from revealing herself was that her fear was far stronger than her hunger. She remained hidden under her blanket among the rocks and watched. And listened.

The strangers’ words slithered faintly to Jacinta in the night air, not clear enough to be fully understood. She could hear enough to know that the language was similar to her own but it sounded much softer and more lilting than the harsh, staccato tongue of her tribe. There was one word, however, which she heard repeated several times and which was pronounced exactly the same way as it was by her people: passcode.

A brief glimmer of hope rose in the midst of her fear and uncertainty. Did these people hold the key that could free her brother Mikel from the Watcher? Hope and fear and wonder and frustration swirled within her. She wished she could get closer in order to hear more but there was no way to do so and ensure she stayed undetected. So she remained still, trying to calm herself by silently reciting the Prayer of the Desert Mothers.

The travellers finished their meal, extinguished the fire and settled down to rest for the night. Jacinta hoped this might give her the opportunity to scavenge but one of the riders always kept watch while the other two slept. The night seemed to last forever, enveloping her in a shroud of loneliness.

Eventually the darkness let the merest hint of light taint it. The riders packed their camp silently, forgoing breaking their nightly fast but ensuring their steeds were fed and watered. They mounted and began to move up the nearby incline. Unlike the noisy gallop of the previous day they moved slowly, almost reverently.

When they reached the crest of the hill they stayed unmoving for a long time. Jacinta knew that they were looking down upon the concrete wall which was part of the Watcher’s Keep. When the sky contained more light than dark they moved again. As they descended and their heads disappeared from view Jacinta also began to move. Slowly at first but then suddenly breaking into a run.

She wanted to warn them about the Watcher, to tell them of all those who had gone before them only to fall at the last. But mostly, she wanted to tell them of her brother, her only remaining family.

She ran faster, every moment fearing the flash of light which always came when visitors stayed too long and raised the ire of the Keep’s guardian.

Jacinta reached the top of the hill and collapsed as she looked down to the Keep. There was no sign of the riders or their mounts.

***

I met a traveller from an antique land

Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone

Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand,

Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown

And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command

Tell that its sculptor well those passions read

Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,

The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed.

And on the pedestal these words appear:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:

Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!”

Nothing beside remains. Round the decay

Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare

The lone and level sands stretch far away.

Shelley, Ozymandias

posted 2 years ago on February 16th, 2010 at 06:35 /
tags: Here At the End of All Things Monday PG TMC
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The Girl at the Bus Stop - Chapter 6

Previously.

He feels the usual fluttering in his chest. It always starts as the bus approaches the roundabout near the hospital. Her stop is just after that - the one opposite the hospital’s main entrance. She feels it too. They only have a few minutes left together before going their separate ways. But only for a time.

They sit silently, holding hands, remembering the first time they touched just a few months ago. He occasionally reaches out to gently brush the hair from her eyes and is rewarded by her sweet, calming gaze.

She dresses a little less casually these days. He still looks professional but has introduced a bit more colour to his wardrobe. Neither of them made a conscious decision to do this. It just happened and they appear to fit together better as a result. Even her bag and his briefcase look like part of a set.

As the bus pulls in they rest their foreheads against the other, the tips of their noses touching. They seem to stop breathing for a moment then laugh quietly, enjoying the feel of the other’s breath on their lips. In that brief moment the rest of the world disappears.

The bus is running ahead of schedule, as it usually is at this time of day, so the driver leaves it idling and flicks through a tabloid while standing by the doors, smoking a cigarette. This gives them a few more precious minutes together on their seat at the back of the bus.

They like to sit as far back in the bus as possible. It gives them the illusion of having more time with each other. There was one morning, not long after they’d first met, when they’d had to sit apart. The next day, and every day after that, they started getting up early and walking three stops further than they needed to, to be certain of sitting side by side in one of the back seats.

There have been a few times when they’ve thought of getting on a random bus, just to see where it would take them. One day they will. The thought makes them feel a nervous excitement.

The driver retakes his seat and turns to look at them, giving a whistle to let them know he’s preparing to pull out. They kiss and then she makes her way quickly down the bus, winking cheekily at the disapproving white-haired widow who is always seated a few rows ahead of them. She skips out the door and sits at her usual place at the bus stop. Neither of them think about the day ahead. The lectures, the note-taking. The meetings, the analysing of figures. They think only of each other. As the bus finally restarts its journey into the city centre he looks back and returns her wave and smile. He keeps looking until the bus rounds the corner and she is out of sight. He always looks back.

posted 2 years ago on February 1st, 2010 at 10:55 /
tags: The Girl at the Bus Stop Thursday TMC PG
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Knowing - Chapter 5

Previously.

Two feet, six inches. Such a small gap and yet to Patty it felt like a chasm. She had to get past the living room doorway but if seen it would probably mean losing her last chance of freedom. She edges slowly forward, pausing every step to listen, wishing her heart would stop beating so loudly, convinced its pounding would betray her.

Patty stops at the edge of the doorway. Opposite her, the stairs to the upper floor disappear into darkness. She can still hear him, scar-face, arguing with himself and can make out a stream of profanity. Little else of his slurred ranting makes any sense.

In two paces she can be on the stairs. But which way is he facing? It doesn’t sound like he’s moving about. From the direction of his voice she guesses he must be sitting in the beat up old armchair, the one that has its back to the kitchen.

She holds her breath and moves swiftly and silently to the staircase, flicking her head to the side briefly as she does so. She doesn’t see him and knows that if he is in the armchair that he won’t have seen her.

Patty stops on the first step and reminds herself to start breathing. She moves haltingly up the stairs, avoiding the squeaky third and fifth steps, and allows herself the luxury of a deep breath when she reaches the landing. She rests a moment to give her eyes the chance to adjust to the darkness and then makes her way to the bedroom.

There’s just enough light from the street lamp to illuminate the room. He’s clearly been in here. Her wardrobe is opened and her belongings scattered over the floor. She moves to her nightstand and nearly slips on a book. She laughs at the title, “The World Is Yours”, a book on Eastern spirituality and meditation techniques. “All the mantras and visualizations aren’t going to help you now Patty.”

She reaches toward the nightstand and realizes she’s still tightly clutching the knife she used to cut the ropes. She places it on the bed and flexes her stiff fingers. Her hand looks so small. A sense of utter aloneness washes over her. She wishes she’d stayed at Ms. Brooks’ place but then wonders if it would actually have made a difference. And what has happened to her dogs? She doesn’t dare think about what he might have done to them.

Patty finds herself fighting back tears as she opens the hidden compartment in the nightstand and takes out the gun her father gave her. She has never liked guns but for the first time is grateful that her Dad showed her how to use one and insisted she have it when she left home. She hears his voice guiding her as she loads the bullets and steels herself for what is to come.

She makes her way cautiously back to the stairs and descends, stepping awkwardly over the creaky steps. She stops at the bottom and listens.

Silence.

Is it to much to hope that he’s passed out drunk? She forces herself to stand in the doorway and look into the living room. She enters and sees that he’s not there. The quiet is unnerving. The nearly finished whiskey bottle lies on its side at the base of the armchair next to an empty glass.

She moves quickly to the door which leads to the entrance hall and presses her ear against it. Nothing. She steps back and reaches for the handle.

“Going somewhere?” His voice turns her blood to ice. She turns her head to one side and sees his hulking frame filling the kitchen doorway. “I want that fucking key.”

Patty turns to face him and he roars with laughter when he notices the gun. “You haven’t got the fucking guts, you stupid bitch. You always were a useless piece of shit, Diana.”

“My name.” She raises the gun and cocks the hammer. “Is Patty.”

A momentary look of doubt crosses his face. Then he laughs again and begins to walk towards her, an evil grin distorting his mess of a face even further.

Patty slowly pulls on the trigger and simply says, “Namaste, motherfucker.”

posted 2 years ago on January 23rd, 2010 at 05:17 /
tags: Knowing friday TMC PG
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Weekly Wrapup - Round 3, Week 4.

Well it was high drama last week - and that’s just in the lives of the contributors! Anyway, here’s the summary of last week’s chapters:

Here At The End Of All Things

Due to problems with the time continuum our story of the future has drifted out of synch. Fear not though gentle readers! We’re working on getting the flux capacitor back up and running so expect things to get caught up. Sometime.

Paul’s Wound’s

Cary keeps the past and present continuing on their collision course. What will happen to the fish?

Gasoline

Jay seems to think that being hospitalised is a valid reason for not getting his chapter done last week. Some people just have no commitment.

The Girl At The Bus Stop

Marleymarley brings our tale of buses passing in the day and night to a potentially life-changing moment. The penultimate chapter this week will be very interesting indeed.

Knowing

Richard builds the tension as the victim of mistaken identity prepares to fight back. Will we see a table-turning confrontation?

posted 2 years ago on January 19th, 2010 at 05:15 /
tags: TMC PG
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